Invisible

I am the invisible,
never seen,
never felt,
never heard.

*I like how you explain invisible and all of it's meanings. Nice way to start*

Hidden by a mask,
the truth held in,
nothing said,
nothing heard.

*I like how this stanza mirrors the first almost. Very clever*

Undecided on the truth,
hurt or happy?
Does it matter?
It all ends the same.

*I like the use of rhetorical questions. Nice*

A broken thought leads to another,
around in circles,
it will never stop,
and give a rest.

*I like how you write. It seems broken and incomplete, but it works*

Crying over the sudden realization,
the lies that build up,
the forgotten,
the invisible.

*Wow..what a sad poem. I really enjoyed this. It was different. Nice work. Nik*

This was beautiful. very heartfelt very expressive. the emotion you expressed was really touching.

Crying over the sudden realization,
the lies that build up,
the forgotten,
the invisible

i liked that stanza the most. a perfect ending. so powerful. this was a wonderfully deep poem. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

This is amazing!! it is beautiful and flowing!!

This is good xxx