Can someone help me

I liked your poem it's really good...good job!!

So sad.... good job

The nightmares I lived
Each and every one
I start to shake
And feel so numb
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You have painted such a vivid picture of .... as darkness falls our thoughts turn to the past and the pains that seem to consume our mind seep in, bringing forth the nightmare we only wish we could waken from.

I don't know what to do
What to think, how to feel
Nothing in my life
Ever seems real
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A very hard hitting stanza! As though lost in the turmoil, sucked down by the spiraling swirl of sadness.

I want to run away
Learn to run free
Can someone help me
Escape this insanity?
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To run in search of happiness, hoping that someone will reach out their hand and guide. Screaming for help, begging for sanity.
Great ending stanza!

The title says all .... "Can someone help me"
the thing we crave ... someone to just reach out and pull us through. Make us feel we do "exist"

Well done
Luanne

You explain how I feel right now perfectly.
wonderful. honestly.
keep it up!

Very well written. 5/5 :-)