My door

Very nice you got a lot said with few words, which i like.
A small punctuation mistake second last line, ( you're instead of your) otherwise a lovely poem once more that i think would have made the recipient very happy.

Grant

I appreciate your poem. It's a lovely one. Only thing you need to fix is the punctuation marks. That's what I think.
Overall it's good.

Loved this poem too.
Has real meaning <3
Related to me, and also I liked the structure of the poem.
Keep it up.
Also 5/5

- Nicole xx

Reallly good!! soo cute!
xoxo

We could sit in an empty room
and still have the world at our feet
^^^
I love your opening lines, they breathe life.

i tell you everything about me
and you listen to every word
^^^
The meaning of true friendship. The bond that holds friends together ... talking, learning, accepting and loving

You have penned a sweet, loving friendship poem for someone you truly appreciate as a friend.
Well done Cara
Luanne