Crushed Petals

Was vary good. It something everyone can take there own way and can c the meaning.

This poem is nice, but it seems you repeated yourself in way. For example, in the first stanza
and second stanza you write:

Rose petals drift to the floor.
Wilting and swiveling through time,
like so many dreams now given up.
Turning black and gloomy.

Rose petals now brittle and crumbling,
Upon the baron marble floors,
crushed under our feet,
like so many of our hopes.

So they are slowly dying, I can understand that, the poem makes sense so far.. but the next two stanza's you write:

Fresh rose petals drift to the floor
red and soft with youth.
Staining our feet blood red
as we slowly kill someones inspiration.

Poor Crushed petals
sadly forgotten by time.
Left behind forever.
Lost and lonely; dead.

This left me a bit confused, as the first two stanza's expressed the deteriorating of rose petals, then in the third stanza they are fresh rose petals all over again? It didn't quite make sense to me, overall it was a nice poem though.

A beautiful piece. Cardinal petals fading atrous, referring to hampering ones inspiration is outstanding. 5/5

Wow this poem is fabulous. You have used such beautiful imagery! The choice of words fit the piece beautifully. There was a magnificent flow. Besides the word corrections that were stated above there is no need for change. Superb piece!

5/5. Now this is more like it. The metaphors are well chosen and applied. This was a very enjoyable read.