Let It Die

by X Harlea X   Mar 30, 2008


I am so sorry,
that i am letting it die.

i just can't take it anymore,
i can't stand lieing to you.

about how i feel,
and all the other crap.

i never meant to hurt you,
espiceally for the last time.

i never meant to let it die,
i just can't keep living a lie.

i am so sorry,
that i let it die.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Adam RIP Lesthat and Cody Hayden

    Very good job
    ;) lesthat

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Once again, I'm not a non-rhyming poem fan, and this piece I though wasn't as good as the other one, but the last two stanzas made it better than the first poem (sorry if that sentence seems long and complicated). Obviously I liked the last two stanzas because they rhymed, and flowed well.

    Brad

    P.S. Thanks for your comment on my poem 'When 2nd version'.

  • 16 years ago

    by silent screams

    Brilliant poem, i can relate. 5/5

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