Far Away

Very powerful... keep it up hun

This was a good poem, but I've gotta say that the structure of it isn't very good. I enjoyed reading it though and I certainly got the meaning of it. The only problem is the structure. It's good and since I did like it, I'll give it a 5/5. Good job!!

.:CiiNDY:.

I liked it a lot, although it did lack on emotion a little bit. but, who am i to talk, your poems are way better than mine anyway.
but yeah, just sometimes it helps to have someone else read your work because they can be completely open minded about it.
it is very good though.

Drifting far away
the mind does wonder.
Lost in its thoughts and dreams.

It searches but it cannot find what it searches for.
The pain of failure cuts deep
with this sad realization.

5/5 on this part , it paints a beautiful picture . The rest though needs some work . Leave off there , don't elaborate . Kind of work in another idea . 4/5 overall .

I liked this. It was good. It had a lot of emotions and feelings, and you let them out very well. Great job. 5/5