Hello no one

by Kaila   Apr 1, 2008


"Hello somebody who will never know my name,"
I am like the little bug on the gray window pane,
Shouting but still you do not hear my call,
Watching you with her, makes me feel so small.

I am the dull black rock in the golden brown sand,
You are the lotion scent on a good girls hand,
Do you see me when I look into your golden eyes?
Am I even here to you, or am I in a disguise?

Starring up at the stars, so very majestic tonight,
My heart is a plane it plunges down from flight,
Tingling lips ache to grasp a hold of yours,
Rain falls pounding, my pounding heart it soars.

Again and again I feel your touch brush by,
Never will this feeling stay with me, just want to die,
I am the lonely raisin in the perfect mix of chocolate chips,
You are the sensation of all sweet things upon my lips.

Then on a predictable raining Monday you look my way,
I am so tongue tied on what words I should say,
"Hey, ugh can I borrow a pencil for the test please?"
I sighed and let out a shallow breath with ease.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Justin

    Great Poem! You did a really good job with all your metaphors and the imagery of how the girl felt...You could tell she had deep feelings for the guy..

    "Again and again I feel your touch brush by,
    Never will this feeling stay with me, just want to die,
    I am the lonely raisin in the perfect mix of chocolate chips,
    You are the sensation of all sweet things upon my lips."

    ^ was my favorite line... flowed so well and the words you chose were very good =D good-job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by noha

    Waw its realy great and i enjoy alot,
    i love the way you write it and the picture you paint for everyone read this poem,i realy love the start :Hello somebody who will never know my name,"
    I am like the little bug on the gray window pane,
    Shouting but still you do not hear my call,
    Watching you with her, makes me feel so small.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very well done, it seems some one is in love

  • 17 years ago

    by Syn

    I really enjoyed the emotion that i felt comming from this poem, the flow was good. The wording is a little off the wall, but hey its good :-) 5/5

    -Syn

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