What I See

by Angela   Apr 2, 2008


I look in the mirror...
What do I see?
A plain looking girl
Yep thats me

I look all around...
What do I see?
all these people
Don't see the real me

I look inside...
What do I see?
My heart is beating
But its killing me

I look at my wrists...
What do I see?
All the blood
Its coming from me

I look back at my life...
What do I see?
Not a plain girl
Just a very unique me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX

    Yay...I liked it. It's a good poem, short, simple, and beautiful. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    ALl I have to say is. I was looking at our poetry club and saw the name angela. and I'm like wow another angela. then you said you were called angie.. so I'm like ok I'll read her poems. Not only do we have the same name ( never said this on here).

    I can relate to this poem. I luv it its beautiful. and its how I feel exaclty. you write very well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    What an exelent poem
    I love the turn around at the end thank you so much for staying with us you would truly be missed ! write on

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww i lvoe it, great flow aswell xxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Justin

    Liked the poem! Very good =D

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