The looking glass (version 2)

by Mr. Darcy   Apr 3, 2008


~ The Looking Glass ~
An observation of the following painting:
A lady at the Virginals with a gentleman
Jan Vermeer, 1632-1675

http://www.royalcollection.org.uk/egallery/object.asp?object=405346&row=0&detail=magnify

Solitude daydreams with her heavy heart,
Her mocking hell stabs a steely sneer.
Loneliness spills its cold sobbing oceans.
Drenching lives that now silently die.
In the wounded and blood-hued moonlight,
No one wants to hear the wailing screams.
The eternal lost and never found.
There is no escape for her!

Stumbling, cursing he enters the room,
Spewing a storm of rot from inside.
His tart filled promises faintly echo.
Cruelly repeating his selfish stroke.
The impossible smoulder cannot defy,
Habitual lying. Perpetual pain.
Each day he commits, a slow suicide.
There is no escape for him!

Pity these fools, in their wretched dungeon.
Resentment, reeling within tied vowels.
Alas, these times are steeped in despair.
Forever an age, repeating history.
There is no escape for them!

Through the mirror, a world of sunshine,
Where companionship dances with love.
Compassion for song and pleasure of life;
always together, husband and wife.
There is no escape; not even through-
The Looking Glass!

M. Moran
16.03.08

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Micheal, this is awesome work. You are amazing poet. I love this poem...wow.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Very impressive piece of work!
    Have to say i dont know which one i prefer!! lol...

    You are a great writer as i have said many times before and i think its a privilage to read your work!

    Keep it up!

    Danielle
    XX

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    The painting is a great addition to the poem. It gives one a look into the visual that inspired such piece.

    Loneliness spills its cold sobbing oceans.
    Drenching lives that now silently die.
    ^^^
    I love these lines in your opening stanza. Amazing visuals created!

    Spewing a storm of rot from inside.
    ^^^
    Great line!

    Pity these fools, in their wretched dungeon.
    Resentment, reeling within tied vowels.
    ^^^
    Very creative line woven here!

    There is no escape for her!
    There is no escape for him!
    There is no escape for them!
    ^^^
    I love how you ended the 3 beginning stanzas ... her, him ... them

    Very impressive read you've penned here. Your words like an addiction ... I seem to keep returning for more.
    Excellent read, as always
    Luanne