Final Breath

by An Angel in the Darkness   Apr 11, 2008


A dreamer lost at sea,
Calls out all too desperately.

A window looks out across the broken shore line,
An unforeseen sign.

In a haunted wood a fallen angel cries,
Lays down silently, and dies.

A razor blade shines in the evening sun,
A broken girl whispers to the world, "I'm Done"

And a mother cries,
As her daughter dies.

A broken heart,
That had been shattered from the start.

A darkened soul,
A life that is no longer whole.

So on her face is a fake smile,
As she goes through her final trial.

So there's her final breath,
And now is her death.

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  • 15 years ago

    by claire

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    This was a very emotional poem. it really touched me. it was lovelyy. very expressive, and detailed. absolutely beautiful in every way. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Frank the Great

    Great job in this poem. i really liked it. very deep torwards the end. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Amy

    WOW! That was very deep. I wasn't sure where it was going at first, but I really liked the way it ended. Good job!