Suddenly you were there

by Baby Rainbow   Apr 13, 2008


My life was so messed up
everything was going wrong
i felt like i was a failure
i believed i didnt belong

i planned out all my suicide
i was finally ready to die
the knife was in my hand
it was now time to say goodbye

i thought no one would notice
i believed no one would care
as i closed my eyes i made a wish
and suddenly you were there

saffie
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  • 13 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Oh! you were lucky! I'm also happy he's there! I enjoyed reading.
    The rhyming is very good.
    Oh just you have to change "goodnye" to "goodbye". This is aside, but really it's a good piece.
    ...Khalid...

  • 14 years ago

    by WhiskeyGirl

    Beautiful poem. Very nice, keep it up. xxx.

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