What hurt the most

by Dustin S   Apr 18, 2008


What hurt the most is when we left each other.
And now you say "I'm not comin back. Dont bother"
I want to tell you I messed up and I'm sorry.
We do need to be apart for now.
But when you left.....just ow.
I will remember all the good times we've had,
And I always will be your helping comrade.
I will help you when you've fallen,
I will catch you like cars do pollen.
I guess I am saying I miss you,
I care about you. I love you. (still)
But you wanna be friends? Thats fine,
Everything in life isnt a straight line.
I am a friend,
A hand I will lend,
But I want to tell you,
We were one until we split in two.
I miss you cheyenne.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mary

    Great poem i love the rhythm and the meaning keep it up :)

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Things cant go back to the way it used to be for now.you are a great kid dustin but i can only be your friend.great job on the poem.5/5
    **harlea