Mistake of Nothingness

by thewritingwriter   Apr 19, 2008


I don't think quiet is really all that quiet
The night is so quiet
Some mistake quiet for nothingness
A noise of nothing
Quiet has a noise
It is the soft hush of night
Deep into your soul
A loving whisper
Of black night
Into your ears.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lacie

    You have a gift i like it good-job

  • 16 years ago

    by Damned from the Holy

    Callie,
    i love this poem oh so very much, its so true. What a beautiful thought, its like the thought of sensation of paper. this poem shows your personality and what you think about, now i look at you in a different way. i give it a five out of five. i would give you a twenty but the scale doesnt go that high. well keep up the wonderful work and keep bein the best you can. im proud of you. Your poems are from the heart, and thats what counts. i know whats in your heart just by reading your poems. and im glad i know you. God bless you.

    Your spanish class pal, friend, angel and admirer.

    -Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    :) lovely. Amazing. Thoughtful. All very well. 5/5

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