by Ash Apr 19, 2008
category :
Life, society /
about society
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Cry me a river that shows only pain, |
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I love it! It's a great poem! |
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The line "should i say their name?" should be "should I say their names?" |
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Great job, i really liked it full of emotion. you really got your point out there. 5/5 |