Suicide </3

by TillyMariex   Apr 20, 2008


The gun in her hand
as she sits there alone
waiting for someone to walk in
but nobody's home.

She takes a deep breath
puts the gun to her head
pulls the trigger
she is now dead.

Pills in his hands
as he dies inside
he wants to come out
but all he does is hide.

He smiles that fake smile
and shoves the pills down his throat
heaven is so far away
but god just watched him choke.

Razor in her hand
as a tear falls down her cheek
shes fighting against death
but shes just too weak.

She cries one last tear
brings the razor to her wrist
pushes down deep
shes had enough of this.

Rope in his hand
as he smiles to himself
nobody understands
all the pain he's felt.

He takes one last look around
puts the rope around his neck
he swinging back and forth
and there goes his final breath.

The edge of the mountain is in view
as he tightly holds her hand
they tried to explain to everyone
but nobody will ever understand.

They smile at each other
as tears escape their eyes
walk right off the cliff
together,their love dies.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Woww..this poem is nothing less then amazing. It truly is excellent. its so sad, but i agree with Gracie Lancaster ^^, all those lives that couldve been saved, if there was someone there who really cared. its so sad.. </33 But anyway it was a nice write..All up good job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FoReVeR UrS

    I love ur poem.. it made me cry

  • 16 years ago

    by Gracie Lancaster

    This is a very touching poem
    thinking about all the people hwos lives could have been saved if others cared more brought a tear to my eye.
    its amazing all the emotions and feelings you capture in this brilliant poem. 5/5
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