Extinguish me

by Amir Riveroll   Apr 22, 2008


I breathe in the ashes
when i breathe throught my heart
i carry my lungs
when i walk through the dark
i have suffered the fire
and here comes the smoke
i became less concious
with each word she spoke

the firefighters couldnt extinguish
a questions of why did she leave
it burnt me like hell
i just couldnt believe
the less i see her
the less my heart beats
im walking closer to death
im burning so deep

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Excellent piece again from you...The image of a broken heart was so vividly described...It was written wit deep thoughts and the pains reside somewhere was very clearly stated..Well Done..Keep writin..xDD