Im Sorry

by Tiffany   Apr 22, 2008


I am sorry for what will happen next
i coud not just sit there and act the same
because it was tearing me up inside.

I could not lie
to what has given me life
I got so worried
I even made myself very sick.

I am sorry for what they will say to you
because I know they will be harsh.
fore they are trying to protect me from what is wrong.

I am sorry for what I can not change
all I can do is except what has been done
and know I can not change it.

I am sorry my Love
for what we will have to go through
I am also sorry
fore I do not know
what to do

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    This definitely seems like a venting poem. Writing is a great way to let off some steam or just get things off your chest. It's a very good coping mechanism [sp?].

    to what has given me life

    ^^ "given" should be "giving".

    fore they are trying to protect me from what is wrong.

    ^^ "fore" should be "for".

    Just a little tip: Punctuation really does wonders for a poem. It helps the reader know when to pause and take a breath. I know you have a few periods in there, but some more punctuation would really help it out.

    Hope everything works out!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww thats good, hope it all works out, keep writing xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Coffee Loves Nachos

    Baby it is ok... fore I love you and nothing will change that.

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