I cant even describe how i felt reading this poem. i am often sad yet i cant help faking that im happy. also, my nickname is Princess. 1,000,000/5!

Cute

Wow! Omg! this is the best poem i've read so far... you're very good and very imaginative.....

Oh my gosh that was amazing I know the feelings so well You really deserved that win

Omg, Gabs, this was definitely a winner.
no wonder like 2000 people read it and left 27 comments!

I love this stanza:

Say good night to Princess
she's still sitting on the steps
magic glass slippers, black boxes
how easily we forget

It's so real, and down-to-earth.
I love how you made a fairy-tale/fantasy seem so real and sensical!

Keep writing and (:*P) write one for me!
Sophie

Not bad!

Very good usage of words, creating an image in my head was pretty easy!

Not to mention the thought behind it. Beautiful, 5/5

Tyler

Wow....very good and very interesting..would never think bout sumthin like tht..good job =)

Ohemgee it was absolutely splendid!!
loved this part so muchh! :
"But lock it all up
the ball's ever near
hides behind her mask
fake smiles, real tears"

Very good poem! Unique, mystical and yet very much like reality. Nice job and keep up the good work. =]

Wow this is very unique...i love it

Awesome... love it!!!

Oh, wow. Usually, I won't even read poems that rhyme constantly. But this was so different. I got the chills.

"Reader, didn't you know?
even angels sin..."

^my favorite.

"Reader, didn't you know?
even angels sin..."

^my favorite.

Everyone forgets want we do not wish to see....what a sad and beautiful poem.

Wow, this piece is amazing. It really made an impression, and was a huge twist from the normal stories of Cinderella, the ball, the glass slipper, happily ever after. This piece kinda makes you think, and I love that. The emotion and style is stunning. The word choice is amazing and the flow beautiful. Thank you for writing such a terrific piece

5/5

~MRK

I love this poem! :]]]

This poem is full of imagery. it inspires my imagination. i like it, keep up the great work. 5/5

Excellent

I love the twist on Cinderella... very creative. 5/5