Amazment!

by C P Sharma   Apr 23, 2008


(I met Kabir)
This morning when in trance,
At my body I had a glance,
Me, its composition amazed,
How deftly are the elements caged!!!

I met a potter, the Earth,
At the wheel she had berth;
Carving the pots so fine,
No artist can ever design.

Its every piece was unique,
Built with a perfect technique.
She had designed a cage,
Nine exits she did stage.

The Fire provided it the fuel,
The Water did keep it cool,
The Sky did its limit provide,
The Air bird was there inside.

The Air fanned them all,
Them in their places install.
The world suddenly became alive,
It was at the Marine Drive.

The bird inside cluttered and danced,
Its all activities I glanced.
Finally, Life bird flew out,
From my trance I came out.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    You know my poetry isnt as amazing as yours :P because this peom is amazing with such a rythm =D!! I loved every moment of it actually! You know you are amazing through person and as a true poet! People are blind to not see what a good poet you are!! You leave amazing comments also!! I really dont know whats about you as a person but it just makes me see things =D

    CourtneyxHolland
    ~5/5~