Can You See Me Now

by Ill Give Blood To Your Dried Veins   Apr 23, 2008


Can you look at yourself now knowing your the reason I died? Did you know you were the only person I ever loved? You were the one thing I couldn't live without. You took away my world and sealed my eyes closed.
It's hard to live without a heart. You ripped mine out and squeezed it dry. You made me die inside. Didn't you know you were the one thing that could've saved me?
Did you see me fall to my knees? I begged you slowly not to leave. You watched me fall apart. You left me behind in the dust. I wish I would have known sooner, that you were never mine to begin with.
You will never know how much it hurts to go on. I want you to feel everything i went through. I want to watch you fall to your knees begging me please. Revenge is sweeter when it's someone you hate.
Can you see me now. The girl you've defected. No the pieces can't be replaced. It's just a casualty of you false love. The lines you spoke were so silky smooth. Soon you'll be the one falling apart wishing you were dead instead of feeling this torment.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Wow...ur poem really could get through me...It showed how much u r suffering inside and that u r hurt badly...
    I loved it so much..
    Good job,keep it up...

  • 15 years ago

    by ShatteredInPieces

    Thanks for the comment.

    this is really well written.
    well done.

    xx.

  • 15 years ago

    by halie

    Wow
    great poem
    i loved it
    5/5
    p.s thanks 4 commentng

  • 15 years ago

    by heartbrk1

    Well shut my mouth.............................

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