Sunburst Sonata (haiku)

We used to have term in the Navy called Channel fever which was used when we were coming off a ten month deployment and finally nearing the pier where our familes waited. It was hard bearing those last few miles where the ship usually crawled along. It was the slowest longest part of our journey but worth the wait when we would hear the cheers raise up from the piers when our friends and families spotted us on the horizon. Their voices would carry to sea for miles. It sure is good to come home. Ok - lost in thought here, I liked your short and wonderful piece. enjoyed your cabin fever.

Excellently penned Haiku as always Debbie!

Congrats on the 100 mark ... looking forward to 100's more
Luanne

A 100 poems, my sweet girlfriend-with -the-cute-doggie???
Congratulations Debbie, I so love your work. Consider me your life time fan:)
I love this little Japanese verse also, great wording!

Hugs,

Ingrid

100 poems.. you little ripper!! Fantastic job on this piece also!! awesome word usage and imagery!!
Beautiful first line to set the mood!! Well done!!

Congrats on number 100 Deb!!!!!!!

What a beautiful Haiku. This paints a lovely picture of spring and the happiness it brings after a long cold winter,

Love Cindy