Comments : Sedona Lullaby

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie
    This is a beautiful tribute to Louann....and I'm sure she heard you reading it and is smiling down on you right now. I know how much you loved her and will miss her. You were so lucky to have her in your life for all those years. Now she is resting without pain.
    Your poem is so heartfelt. Brought tears to my eyes when you read it to me. I have so many memories of you and her...and almost all of them make me smile.
    Awesome job on this
    I love you sis
    Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Lu

    Deb
    Such a beautiful piece you have weaved for your dear friend.
    I remember you mentioned you had a friend by that name at the reunion.

    Beautiful tribute ~hugs~

  • 9 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    This is extremely beautifull!
    And very heartwarming
    I'm sorry for your loss
    *hugs*

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    She would have loved it. It is perfect. Nice word choice and beautiful imagery. Very heartfelt.

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Beautifully written, you did an excellent job..I'm sure they would be honored to read this if they were here. Congrats on your win

  • 9 years ago

    by The Queen

    This was a very touching and fine tribute to your friend.

    Excellent concept and remarkably well done. Congratulations on a well-deserved win :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Fire Catches

    Strong poem :]
    Sorry for your loss
    Amazing poem you written for
    your friend

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    She must have been a beautiful persson to inspire such a beautiful epitaph.

    amazing poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats Deb!
    Now I know she is really smiling :)
    I love you

  • 9 years ago

    by chind

    That was beautiful, such soft words, lovely.
    Im sorry for your loss, and congrats on your win :)
    I'm sure your friend is in a better and happier place now. R.I.P

  • 9 years ago

    by Ixora

    Beautiful poem speaks with every word. my condolences for your loss.

  • 9 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A rather well written poem, I felt. The use of the English language was creative and refreshing, and seemed effortless.

    Brad

    P.S. Please comment and vote on all the poems you read.

  • 9 years ago

    by abracadabra

    I just posted in the Robert Frost thread. I said something about how rare it is, nowadays, to find regular standard aabb rhyme schemes that are well executed- with good flow, beautiful imagery and effective delivery that doesn't compromise the poem's integrity.

    Yet, here you are.

  • 8 years ago

    by anand singh

    The words expressed over the loss of your dear friend has touched my heart deeply.
    Wis I had readit it earlier but had lost all motivation to come here for a while.
    If it's one thing that we can count on is the promise of our Lord and savior Jesus Christ who promised us that one day we will re-unite with the ones we love.
    I'm sure your friend knows what your heart feels for her and is watching down at you and smiling.
    Take care.
    Paul...