This is a beautiful tribute to Louann....and I'm sure she heard you reading it and is smiling down on you right now. I know how much you loved her and will miss her. You were so lucky to have her in your life for all those years. Now she is resting without pain.
Your poem is so heartfelt. Brought tears to my eyes when you read it to me. I have so many memories of you and her...and almost all of them make me smile.
Awesome job on this
I love you sis
I just posted in the Robert Frost thread. I said something about how rare it is, nowadays, to find regular standard aabb rhyme schemes that are well executed- with good flow, beautiful imagery and effective delivery that doesn't compromise the poem's integrity.
The words expressed over the loss of your dear friend has touched my heart deeply.
Wis I had readit it earlier but had lost all motivation to come here for a while.
If it's one thing that we can count on is the promise of our Lord and savior Jesus Christ who promised us that one day we will re-unite with the ones we love.
I'm sure your friend knows what your heart feels for her and is watching down at you and smiling.