When you look at her...

by thesuffocationinsafety   Apr 26, 2008


When you look at her what do you see?
a smile upon her face,
rosy cheeks, big green eyes
nothings out of place

but yet somethings wrong inside her
hidden behind that smile
she's radiant-a shining star
but only for a while

Dont push past whats on her surface
you don't want to see inside
its where she hides her problems
and where her dreams have died

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  • 16 years ago

    by Frank the Great

    Great poem, really enjoyed reading it. keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by kyrah

    Wow i feel that way sumtymez lyk no1 can tell how i feel behind my smile is pain and hurt...nice poem i lyk it when i can relate to poems

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww this is good xx

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