I'm drowning

by StandStill   Apr 28, 2008


Oh, my God, I'm drowning
somebody grab my hand, please
i can't even breathe right now
i need this stupid pain to ease

I'm reaching for your hand
but i can't feel you there
where the hell did you go??
do you even care?!

I remember days
when i wrote of oceans blue
back when one plus one
still would equal two

But i rocked the boat, babe,
and now i've fallen in
i remember that first time
a lover, a friend, a tragic sin

And now i can't breathe
nobody here to hold me up on land
sure i have feet to swim
but the bottom of the ocean's where i stand

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I'm reaching for your hand
    but i can't feel you there = great line xx

    back when one plus one
    still would equal two = another great line

    this is good work, well done i liked it xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Allisha

    You are an amazing poet! :]
    I'm a big fan.

  • 16 years ago

    by blind soul

    That was really good its sad but really really good! great job^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    My hand is ALWAYS here, don't 4get that Gabby

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    *grabs hand*

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