Through this blade i've set you free

by she   Apr 29, 2008


Do you see how much I love you?
Do you see how sorry I am I've hurt you?
Did you EVER see how hard I tried to be something other than worthless in your eyes?
Do you see how much I love you?
Do you see how badly I want to be a daughter actually worthy of love?!
Do you see I'm tired of hurting you?
Do you see,
I've finally got it,
I know how to make you proud!
By ridding you of myself,
So I'll slice my wrists,
and leave a note that reads like this:
now you can live a life without me,
Through this blade,
I've set you free.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is really good, well done xx

  • 15 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Wow...that was tragic. Wonderfully written,though.The emotion was just burning through the entire poem...making it hard NOT to understand what you're telling the person.Wonderful job:)

  • 15 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    I feel like this sometimes, like the only way to make everyone happy is to not be here to make them sad, "Did you EVER see how hard I tried to be something other than worthless in your eyes?" I love this line, great poem 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Do you see how badly I want to be a daughter actually worthy of love?! * you are wrorthy of love hun, deserve a lot more than what they give you xxxx

    good work x

  • 15 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow the ending was great!
    It was sad, but written so wonderfully.
    i loved it.
    i know how you feel, i often feel that way. *sigh*
    well keep it up
    5/5

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