HELP ME !

by Mister 47   Apr 30, 2008


Help me i bleed inside no breath i can take
it IS not something , someone can fake
i bleed in heart , my tears are flowing
to my cheeks they burn like pearls they are glowing

it burn when you wipe a burning tear
your cheeks turn red , your ears can not hear
you feel your are dying , no air to breath
my hand on my mouth , stopping the screams beneath

did you ever see someone 's heart crying
his face turn black , his body is dying
you try to speak, the words don't get out
you try to scream , you try to shout

all this pain inside, my Friend , you feel ,
so great is the feelings, inside you will deal
sometime, someone break ,he blow from inside,
how i want you death , and i wish you tonight

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Did you ever see someone 's heart crying = thats such a sad line!

    keep writing xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Thanx , very much , i am glade you liked it , i write it under pressure of my feelings , no mood or thinking to read it over at the time

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    There was some parts that you could fix like just put a word in or take out. My advice i really don't give people them because i have mistakes to but just when you write a poem just reread it over before you submit it. but this was a good poem., just kinda hard to read the way it was put together but thats not always wrong either. :)

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.