I LOVE YOU DEATH!

by Mister 47   Apr 30, 2008


Come to me death , on my knees i faint
how i want to meet you , in your arm my saint
how they fear you my dear, they all runaway
they curse you and hate you , this they all say

how i love you death , come to me my dear
save me from my pain , save me from my fear
i can i beg you , come to me , i beg
i am on my knees , have mercy i am on my legs

mercy on me, no more i can take ,
take me to hell , in compare , this life a fake
hell can not be more , the things i feel ,
i beg you take me , i make you a deal

take me with you , i give my soul to you
no complain no running , no matter you do
i will put the Axe on my neck for you to cut
have mercy and kill me , from your first shot

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  • 17 years ago

    by nina

    Emmmm
    i don't like it very much
    it's so so dark and sad
    but heyy beleave me hell is more painful than you think it is in this poem
    and Dont take life too seriously,Always find time to laugh... Remember that laughter not only adds years to ur life,But adds more Life to ur Years....

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow ... That was captivating and heartfelt ! What a poem you've penned ! It's very well written. And I honestly don't know the amount of pain you must have been through to ask for death to be your way out.. The agony & longing for relief was shown in each word & every line 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Nicely written...
    the emotions are well expressed...

    "Come to me death , on my knees i faint
    how i want to meet you , in your arm my saint
    how they fear you my dear, they all runaway
    they curse you and hate you , this they all say "

    ^^this stanza is very captivating... how people fear death...how they runaway from it...hate it... very well written...

    "i can i beg you , come to me , i beg
    i am on my knees , have mercy i am on my legs"

    ^^well...What I felt is repetition of beg doesnot add any impact... i found it a little off...

    Overall.. a good read..

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very powerful, well done keep it up xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by kate

    Wow, this is intense. I really liked how you used death of like calling it like instead of using a girl or a guy has your "person" to kill upon you, you used death which was even more intense then i would've thought of.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

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