Try not to cry that hard

by XXXsuicidalgurlXXX   May 2, 2008


You are gone to a better place
with roses and white lace
when you went it was for a reason
i believe winter was the season
i still think of you day and night
by typing poems i forget the bad times day and night
don`t get me wrong i love you so
but when you went i said no
no to the pain,crying, and grieving over your lost
but yes to making good chooses i came across
so when you have lost a friend
think of good things over again
just think they are in a better place
with roses and white lace
where angels fly
and not that painful goodbye
so don`t be selfish
they`re out of their pain
remember good times
and good things to gain
you might miss them at first
especially when you see the black hearse
wipe away that tear
cause i know it is very near
mascara running down your face
remember a better place

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww thats so tear jerking. hunny that poem is really powerful, a better place and you also made it sound like that by your second line in.

    amazing work please keep writing and sending hugs your way xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by ThomasBlackburn

    This has really good content but you should edit it a little bit. divide it up into stanzas and spell check it. other than that this one is great

  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    Hunny, This poem is really good. I'm sorry that you feel this way and I'm sorry about what happened. But you are right, They are in a better place now. No more pain, No more suffering of any kind. They are happy, But don't worry, They are watching over you. I'm sure of that.

    As for this poem, I give it more then a five in my heart, It was very touching and yet sad. I rate it a 5/5 on here but more then just a five in my heart.

    Keep it up kiddo. Chin up and keep moving forward. Never dwell on the past, Just try making a future. Don't try changing mistakes mad in the past, Just try doing what is best for you and your future..Thats the words I was trying to say. :)

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