Pity The Runt

Excellent short to the point, which makes it more difficult to do well as you did here. A most enjoyable read well done

Grant

Very well written. It went to the point. I loved it!
5/5

keep it up!
-Ally

So simple yet so true. It speaks the truth of half this nation. It's so sad to see these people throw their life away. Even if they didn't have much of a life they still had a chance. Now they kill themselves with a poison that goes deeper than the organs, It leads to suicide, murders, depression. SO many things. It's like a disease.....one that spreads by touch almost. A very honest write. I love it.
~*~Amber~*~

It's a nice one. Though it's very short but nice to read. I wouldn't say you could could add more because that's depends entirely on the writer. All I can say it's good. Nice to read.

Short, but obviously very good. Possibly a little longer? I like longer poems. :] That's what prefer, but short ones are good also. You could add more , but if you don't want to then that's your choice. I don't mind. XD =) Keep it up, 5/5