by Spoken Silence May 7, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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Scream the scream of sorrow, |
by Baby Rainbow
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Loved this one, like poems that repeat a certain line or word etc, really makes it enjoyable to read. keep it up xx |
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I disagree with fillie! you didn't use scream too much! It provides intensity! |
by Heer
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I think you've used the word "screm" too much butits great good work :] |
by Sourav
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Very interesting poem. Differently written.. liked it! |