Loving u

by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX   May 7, 2008


Love is forever
love is beautiful
love is great
but love is even better when i am loving you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "Love is forever "

    I love this start, because it is so true.

    "love is beautiful
    love is great "

    I like how your using love more than once, it shows consistency.

    "but love is even better when i am loving you. "

    Such a sweet way to end this poem. It would have been better longer but I liked this poem non-the-less. Good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    AWWW this poem is really good.=)

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