Believe.

by Spoken Silence   May 8, 2008


Believe.
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Do you believe in soul mates?
Do you believe that people can disappear in the blink of an eye?
You are what I believe in,
Everything that you are is what I love.
Everything that you can be is what I long for.

You are what most can only think of,
Your emotion is special to those who seek it.
You are what gets me through my day,
You are the reason my blood runs through my veins.

I believe in you,
And I hope you believe in me.
These emotions that I show to you are true,
They come from my heart,
With each passing beat a new word arises.

Poetry is what I know,
Emotion is what I learn.
You are what I love.
And I shall love you forever,
Just believe.

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  • 15 years ago

    by rich sanchez

    Awesome job i liked this one alot! these words are very true keep it up! :-)

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mm i dopnt know if youa re trying to make your self beleve in that ro make him beleve in that!!

    the poem need rhyming and the stanzaz are difnre in line lengh mmm but over all
    goo expression sjut i dont like the flow and the way you state the feelings

    i gues it can be way more better

    when you speak of love ,love can make you say the most beautifull poetry with no effort

    jsut elt is flow in you !!!

    keep up

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Too many I's my's me's my's. Meaningful sentiment but you could have structured the poem much better and not used all the filler words. I don't think it is good enough for the front page.

  • 15 years ago

    by Marwa

    Keep it up gud start!

  • 15 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    Waa!!!!!!!!!!!!! more tears!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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