A Chaos Curse-words Can't Relieve
by reJoyce May 9, 2008
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God help me! Are these just thoughts or is this lazy poetry. I have no desire to rhyme, no motivation to try. I need to apply myself but i just can't. I'm losing control. My moods are so unpredictable. i doubt myself increasingly. Why am i going crazy and why can't i stop. i've been all over the emotional spectrum. From life to death i slide back and forth, sometimes skipping in-between. This isn't beautiful, its just me taking advantage of suspended words. Words ungathered or collected, just plucked from the chaos in my head. Using them to aleviate my pain. Even they don't deserve such exploitation. The anger they produce is only a hindrance to my healing. Every one of these sentences could be an ending. Uninspired. |
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16 years ago
by Gizmo
Woop, even though it don't seem like it, that is poetry. that was deep, ever wanna talk give me a pm, or email me just ask for it :]
anyway to the poem :
i love the idea, that you said is it just thoughts or was this lazy poetry. most people will read this and go it'll look better when its in stanzas. but i think the whole lay out the whole feeling behind its is supberb, nice idea to do, as well as your lanuage skills throughout were amaizng. i like the little uninspired, part at the end, it gives it a conclusion. well done -
16 years ago
Oh geeze. man. we need to talk. i'm in acctng. class right now and as i'm sitting here listening to music (jesse mccartney.hehe) i'm thinking...why is my friend hurting like this? why does he have to be so confused? i wish he could be happy and content with his life. with everything in it. the way it is. so yeah, deep thought process there. hehe
