My story (Part 1)

by dandelion   May 15, 2008


I met him in school, it was the first day
It wasn't really great because of the sunray
It was on my face that it's hard for me to see
I was blinded by its light 'til all that's left was me

I saw him again the next day
This time it's great, it's a cloudy day
I followed him 'til he get into his classroom
Then I heard someone called him ".........."

Days after that I just keep on staring at him
Watch him talk, watch him walk,
Watch him laugh and watch him smile
Whenever he's around, my world's like standing still in
Time
It's like my body's freezing
And I feel in my heart..I'm falling

Months had passed without him knowing how I feel
Well I think it's better that way after all he's not
feeling the same
"This feeling will fade," I said to myself
"Some words are just better left unsaid.."

And so the school year was over
And I heard someone say, "Yey! It's summer!"
Everyone was happy except for me
"So this is goodbye..," I said to myself,
Feelin' sad and weary

It's time for my summer classes one week after
I got there at twelve then go straight to the office
to register
And as I walking on my way out,
Still feeling sad and empty,
I saw him..lookin' straight into my eyes..
And i felt like melting
My heart was pounding..I don't know what to do
It's like my world suddenly stopped revolving

"Go now to your classrooms..," someone loudly said
And that loud voice awoke me
My world started revolving again
I looked at him again and saw that he's not there
I turned left..turned right..and saw him nowhere

I went to my classroom and sat on the vacant chair
I looked at the faces of my classmates to see if I
know somebody there
And I was so shocked to see..
That in the row next to me..
A man staring at me..
It's him..lookin' at me deeply..

Many days had passed and things are all the same
He keeps on staring at me everyday
I wanna ask him, "What does your stare mean?"
But I'm afraid he'll answer "Nothing.."

I never told him how I feel about him
I'm just afraid he's not feeling the same
But all I know is that there's something 'bout his stare
So I'm keeping my faith, I know someday
Something will happen
It may not be today, may not be tomorrow
But i'm still believing
Cause this is just a love story in the making..

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  • 15 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    It was actually awesome..
    i actually can relate to it since im goin through the same thing..
    and don't worry about not bein good or anythin..you'll improve over time. :D
    keep up the good work.. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Andrew

    This is a really nice poem, really enjoyed it. Its like a story that keeps keeping you interested. Hey start believing in yourself, your work is great, really loved it. Keep up 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Andy

    Brilliant poem!
    very well written and explained :)
    this is proble my favourite part about your poem
    "My heart was pounding..I don't know what to do
    It's like my world suddenly stopped revolving"

    Amazing :):)

    and its not 1/5 or below at all, haha!
    5/5 most deffinatly :)

  • 15 years ago

    by dandelion

    ..ang ganda cous..saya...ahahaha
    miszyah..love you.

  • 15 years ago

    by REESEY

    I liked it.......:)