JUST ME

by emovampire   May 15, 2008


Tears drown me like the sea,
How I wish I could just flee......
I only wish I could make you see,
How Im trapped unwillingly.........

Chain's wont snap......
I wish I could bring my old self back,
But there is no room for me to slack.....

Smuthered by hate
Drown by blood,
How I wish I could kill this love
It's just so much easier to spill my own blood,.....

Blade cutting into my skin
It's the only way I feel I can win
It may be the ultimate sin.....

BUT for some one who has no faith what do I have to lose??....
Except living in silent vain
Hiding all of my pain,
So why not spill my blood make a stain.......

Hold my breath while...... I am slain...................

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mmm let me se these are very strong feelings, dear, :)
    but i hope you berak it down structure wise,
    mean put it in paragraohs and work some ryhming for it ,

    but else you are very talented in the feleigns adn flow point of view

  • 15 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow this was a deep poem and one i liked, i also liked your unusual format that had organization in it 5/5 ^^

  • 15 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Nice job

    5/5

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