Empty heart

by Goodbye   May 21, 2008


To trust or not to trust
to believe or not to be believe
that in future everything will be OK
So these dragonfly's wings carry me back home
are they strong enough to hold us both

Should I let you go, should I not..
Do these hands are harsh enough
to build a safe home, more than a sand castle
The Wave of life are sometimes too high
the Storm are arisen from the sea
What if they weep us both to the ocean?
Will the corals tell our story to them?

Slowly I am swinging
I am sitting on the swing board
the playground is empty I can see
the sand cakes this on the sand pit
Some toys left from the children
Can we make this life together?

If I promise to take care of you
will you also take care of me when I am old
I want to give you a life
born you to this world but I afraid
one day you will hate me
that I was not good enough for you
That I could not be same time your mom and dad..

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aryaan

    'To trust or not to trust........' kinda shakespearian start! so much emotions have gone through this poem!! great use of metaphores made it fantastic!! wow! great poem!

  • 15 years ago

    by Ezzey

    Really , a beautiful free verse and a creative talent in imagery... god bless you 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hey there Noor what a beautiful but sad and melancholy love poem,i enjoyed reading this very much

  • 15 years ago

    by ForbiddenSnowflake

    Beautifully written. Im speechless, that was so touching.

  • 15 years ago

    by claire

    I love this poem, especially the bit about the corals telling your story, and how its scared and vulnerable and reluctant but there's bravery and willingness at the same time