I will never fear

by Mark   May 22, 2008


The fearsome rain
is dripping down our ceiling
standing in the dark
receiving this unknown feeling

is our purpose in life to breed?
or the lonesome road towards our death?
what will I ever think
when I lie in my bed, hungers for one last breath

have I made it this far
only so that I can die?
or is there another chance
for me to say goodbye?

what did people think of me
and did I ever show?
the real Mark inside my heart
and did they ever know?

that I could be another one
like putting up a mask
a facade, another person
that might have been my task

but even though I'll never know
what happens later on
I will never fear the day
the day I will be gone

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  • 15 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Wow, Mark.

    what did people think of me
    and did I ever show?
    the real Mark inside my heart
    and did they ever know?
    ^^ I love how you put your name in this poem, because it makes it so personal. It's like you're letting the reader get a peek inside your head. Letting them know your thoughts.

    is our purpose in life to bread?
    or the lonesome road to wards our death?
    what will I ever think
    when I lie in my bet, hungers for one last breath
    ^^ Okay. I'm going to fix some little mistakes in here, but I'm not sure if I'm right. Haha. In the first line "bread" should be "breed". In the second line "to wards" should be "towards". In the last line "bet" should be "bed".

    have I made it this far
    only so that I can die?
    or is there another chance
    for me to say goodbye?
    ^^ Oooh. I love questions in poems.. they really get the reader thinking. Sometimes deeper than the writer intended them too, but I think it's always good to put questions in poems.. as long as you don't over do it.

    This was really great, Mark. I enjoyed reading it. :]

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

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