My First Love.

by babblingxbrooke   May 22, 2008


She says she loves him,
but he deserves more.
she says she won't hurt him,
but he can't be so sure.

shes done it once,
there is no guarantee.
things can go back,
to exactly how they used to be.

she says she cares,
but I just can't believe.
that she could care about him,
as much as me.

I want him to be happy,
& if she is the key.
I hope for the best,
& I'll let him be.

but between you & me,
he's perfect in my eyes.
& I use all my strength,
to not break down & cry.

he is something special,
one of a kind.
his voice so soothing,
he's always on my mind.

but I guess that doesn't matter,
because she has his heart.
& I would be lying if I said,
it didn't tear me apart.

he deserves a love,
that is so hard to find.
& maybe I could be the one,
to refresh his mind.

all I can say is,
I don't want to go.
because these feelings are stronger,
then anyone could ever know.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Angel in moonlight

    This is a very excellent poem. I can really relate great job!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow i loved this poem! it's beautifully written, and i love the way you write, i also love the emotion your able to show. great work! =]

  • 12 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Another great poem. So many emotions. A nice rhyme. Great rhythm. Length was great and you definatly got the reader into the poem. This poem was another one I enjoyed of yours. :] The only thing I would change is change your &'s to ands.. but, if that's just not how you write.. then I wouldn't. We all have our ways and styles of writing.
    5/5.