Infidelity

Reminds of my recent poem but this one is only in new and better form.. as in wow you have composed a deeper meaning and creative ideas.

This one reminds of my recent poem but you have written so well and in deeper meaning.. great job

I was kind of taken back by
Haven fallen.
It just sounds, well, funky.

I had to look up the word Haven in the dictionary.
I was so sure that it was a noun.

Until it said that, it could also be a verb.
"To shelter"

Hold on for dear life, and all that you treasure
Do not compromise a sacrament for pleasure

I love that.
Just the flow in those lines were
Flawless.

I loved that part.

Everything to lose, and nothing to gain
You just said, on the line before this
A moment of pleasure.
Doesn't that mean you GAIN a moment of pleasure?

All that [once?] was holy is difficult to get back

All in all.
I really like this.
It wasn't simple
It wasn't difficult to understand either.

I actually didn't have to look up words
Other than that haven thing.

Good write :]