When you were mine

by prittykitty   May 29, 2008


Sitting alone..
i just cant forget
all those nights we'd spend on the phone
i still hear your voice when i close my eyes
still feel your touch on my skin
your smell lingers as time passes by..
look down and a tear drops..
remembering that time
when you were mine...

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  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Short but so heart felt. your rhyming was really great and i could feel your own emotion put inside your words

    great job

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This was so heart felt...I could feel the sadness in every word you wrote down.
    You did a very good job in portraying your feelings!
    Well written too:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Wow! Ur a very talented poetess.. I like this poem very much.. Keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fanny

    BRAVO! that was awesome. the words and the rhyming was excellent. loved the poem. keep writing.

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