I Want to Be

by My Obsεssion   May 29, 2004


I want to be your every tear
That runs down your beautiful face
I want to be the last word on your lips
As you leave this wondrous place

I want to be the last thing you think of
Before you go to bed
I want to linger in your thoughts
And frolic through your head

I want to be with you always
If only in your dreams
I want to be there for you forever
To hush your silent screams

I want to be your favorite song
That's always running through your head
I want to be your memories
That stick with you until you're dead

I want to be the last thing you think of every night
Before you go to bed
And I want to be the first thing you think of every morning
As you raise your sleepy head

I want to be the very air you breathe
That is essential to your life
I want to be with you always and forever
To be the one you call your wife

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ten Feet Tall

    beautiful, absolutly beautiful. it is one of the best love poems i have read on here. its very...true. thats what people want. great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    Thanks everyone. Yes I am definetly trying to extend the 2nd part but im still not sure whether to keep it as one poem or not, i'll just decide once i get the 2nd part extended. I've just had a hectic couple of weeks and no time at all, sorry bout the delay I should have time to work on it soon. And thanks eveyone for reading, voting and commenting on it. You have no idea how much it means to me!!

  • 19 years ago

    by patricia

    good job that was great i realli lyked u obvously showed how much u care 4 the person ur writing about good job and keep up the good work ur very talented

  • 19 years ago

    by LeAnNe

    wow! hun, you did an amazing job on this poem! I absolutely loved it. I agree with kristina and tiffany and think you should extend the second part. it was beautifully written and i cant wait to see what you do with the second part!
    *two thumbs up*
    ~LeAnNe
    P.S. If you could check out some of my stuff, i'd really appreciate it! thanks!

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Beautiful..absolutely beautiful, cannot wait for the other one. Love, Tim

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