Just Wait

I can tell its a song. but its agreat one. Your soul is drowning
Too bad you can't swim
Your soul is drowning
Lost in your sin
luv that part. The flow and such.

This is pretty good. but i cant really imagine it as a song because theres so many repeations in every other line. it just seemed akward to me.

but you did have a good idea though. maybe just take out the repeatition ..that could make it better. but thats just my opinion.

its your song so you know how it sounds.

thats why i hate commenting songs because you cant hear them lol.

but its a decent one. so i still give you a 5/5 since i cant really judge it.

Wow...that was awesome..great job...and actually I liked this stanza the most:
Your soul is drowning
Too bad you can't swim
Your soul is drowning
Lost in your sin
I really liked it a lot,I liked the darkness in it and how deep is it...keep it up5/5