Every Moon

by Brenda   Jun 5, 2008


I want to grab that far branch.
To test my balance on every moon.

I want to break the mold they know me by.
Take control of the imaginative wheel.
Run, jump, fall, walk, and even fly.

As years pass and I grow, things will change.
Life won't wait for me to become brave.

I was taught to shield myself.
But no danger has every come my way.
I can't sit inside on a bright sunny day.

Mistakes will come, but I'll learn.
I'll leave a girl, but a women I will return.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I liked this poem, the ending was the best bit. We all learn from our own mistakes. Written beautifully, 5/5. Em

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Oh wow, i absolutely loved this piece. it had such a beautiful message and had a really big impact.

    it was such a strong and powerful piece, filled with so much passion, you did such an amazing job, this was just perfect, it was such a unique poem. you really have got a stunning style of writing, keep it up, you have a lot of talent!!!! take care, 5/5
    love
    shellaine

  • 15 years ago

    by Manish

    Good Work, Keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by Bugg

    Another good poem. I like how this is a 'growing up' poem. The only thing I saw wrong with it was, in the last line, shouldn't it be "woman" instead of "women"? I hope that you enjoy this site and good luck in the future with your poems!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    An inspirational write in which i truly enjoyed nice job once again. It was short but i still got the clear crystal message

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