Goldilocks

Had hair like a DaVinci angel,
emasculated and luxurious, and
it puffed around her face in
silky curly clouds.
^^^
Great imagery created here !!!

She assumes
(which makes it worse than premeditation)
that she is entitled
(which makes it worse than theft)
to anything she happens to want:
house, porridge, bed, partiality...
^^^
I love the uniqueness of this ... brilliant

A very interesting read that holds a deep message.

Loved the read !
Luanne

She is, after all, still a child, young;
above all, immature...

You, however, are a woman of poetic insight,
and the will to carefully demonstrate it......

good job!

Very clever and beautifully written parody
It even has a deep twist

I adore you.

But there was nothing about what a great improvisor she was, or how great she was at getting out of a jam when her back was against the wall.