Where I stand....

by Britt   Jun 8, 2008


He tells me he loves her more than air.

I don't tell him that hurts me, that it's not fair

He says she's the only girl for him

That shouldn't hurt me i knew my chances were quite slim.

He says that because she doesn't feel the same life is to morose to be real

Well at least he knows how I always feel...

I listen to every word he says about her, and let go of my hope that was bound to falter.

He says I'm his best friend , all that he's got

I smile because despite it all.... to know that does help somewhat.

I still do fall apart when he says he loves her.

Because I love him.. but that doesn't seem to matter.

His words are the bullets, he holds the gun

Maybe I'll just always be the broken one.....

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  • 14 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Very emotional poem. The heart ache was beautiful. Well written.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nicole

    Oh wow. i like that. i didnt think it was going to be good idk just cuz lol but it was. good job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Britt

    Lol loisa,myy life isnt half that depressing. haha. i jus exxagerate when i writee. dont worry im not still in that mode. =>>

  • 15 years ago

    by Loisa

    I hope youre still venting britt....i know its hard but he's just a typical jojo ya know? hes just blinded because well you have edward, members??? good one buddy...try to get ova it. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww..really sad...

    umm..i think this would work out better in stanzas, but i still love it...good job..Aly