Never really tried

by anna   Jun 9, 2008


I can plainly see it in your eyes,
the hate you hold for me,
and the disgust you always hid,
I'm sorry father, but you never really tried.

I can feel your pain;
see your inner turmoil,
And the hurt that you hold inside,
I'm sorry mother, but you never really tried.

I can see your lust,
the want that you corrupt,
and the real you, you've lied
I'm sorry Hun, but you never really tried.

I can taste your scorn,
the wraith that you show,
the jealousy you hide,
I'm sorry friend, but you never really tried.

I can hear you scream,
see the dreams you make,
the blood you've cried,
I'm sorry but I never really tried.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Exostosis

    You've tried.............and tried it good.......lol better..................i loved the flow......and the way u referred to every1......im not at all good at commenting but u got tons of talent.........its absolutely cool dat u can put feeling and thoughts into words.......hope u get on some more cool stuffs of urs.............

    peace~

  • 15 years ago

    by Biya

    The slow voice ! Well expressed emotions , well expressed feelings and you expressed the truth very well.. Its reality which is hard to accept .. I truly like this poem ! ..

    Prays for you friend !
    Love will be in ur life soon Ameen
    peace and cheers

    5/5
    Biya

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    I like the idea of this poem. Enjoy reading it as it flows well. Keep writing... You did a good job!

  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Ur poem is really wonderful...so sad and touchable..besides that ur way was so simple and direct,that's why I enjoyed readin it
    Good job keep it up:)
    P.S. you never really (tired)..tried..I know that is what U meant but it was the hurry in typin or sth;)

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