by Saravana Kumar S Jun 10, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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As usual,i have been awakened from my sleep with tears filling my eyes, |
by Sourav
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So much of emotions have gone through this piece. It's not only touchy but very tragic as well. I liked the way you've constructed the lines and expressed the feelings. One can feel the pain and despair very well. A wonderful write. Very well penned! |
by Nobia
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I have always admired your style of writing and this is just another one of your pieces of art :) |
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Amazing work.. i think you're really good! keep it up! |
by Jyoti Rawat
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The way you express your feelings amazing. |
by sneha
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Well written my friend.simple yet powerful lines conveying a message full of pain. |