One Among The Star..

by Saravana Kumar S   Dec 12, 2014

As i have come to live another day,i have come to realize,
how beautiful life is when we truly see through our eyes,
We all go so far apart and so many journeys we undertake,
Some find the purpose and for some,it ends up as mistake.

At the end of it all,what we need is a shoulder to cry upon,
A soul who would remember us when into the dawn we are gone.
Success or failures doesn't quantify the person who you are,
love and affection does,even when you're "One Among The Star".


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  • 5 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    A beautiful message the end it is love that counts.

  • 5 years ago

    by I am

    Welcome back

    Interesting and truly correct poem.

  • 5 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    What a beautiful poem, really touching words. The title itself is beautiful, and then the meaning it holds within your poem is very touching.

    Short, but holds a really inspiring message about life, and how short it is, and how we are all the same in what we are looking for in life.

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Welcome back thambi! That too with a poem that is filled with life's lesson-an experience never to forget. The message here is so clear-we complain, cry, why even hate life but always fail to see the true meaning and its beauty until life has taught us its lesson.

    A heartfelt beautiful poem....hope all is well with you...take care.