by StandStill Jun 16, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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Soft summer rain |
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Great start. then good middle. i LOVED the ending, it was absofreakinglutely perfect. that was sweet, and cute, and i liked it a ton. <3 |
by Empathy
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I love your last stanza. I think that is really the best way you could of ended the poem. I very much enjoyed reading it. Awesome imagery makes poetry such a fantastic thing to read. Very good work here. Excellent! |
by Wake Me Up
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Bravo...mi gabby...stupid boys are sometimes the most lovable |