Fire(song)

Cool. fire's fun to watch. but seriously, 5 no doubt

Lol nice poem, I liked how you added your name to it "Living dead". I never would have thought to doing that in one of my poems. Good job with that.

"Fire from down under,
wow that is super,
the way things burn down there,
just breath taking,"

I like how you make fire sound so beautiful, because to me it is. Whenever you stare at a flame you can't take your eyes off of it. Its just like a state where you can't help but not move.

"look at the way that it burns your flesh,
and the way it eats you up,
and carries you all the way to hell."

Very morbid, I can clearly see this, and I can clearly feel this truly. The fire burning into and around me.

"fight with fire,
fight with nothing,
either way you still gonna go down,
and i'll see you there."

This is so true, no matter how hard you fight, you can't fight back. you can try as hard as you can but no matter what we're all going to end up in the same place anyways. So why fight? because its the normal humanly thing to do.

"
fire fire fire,
that is the way it is down there,
ask some one who lives there,
the fire will take you way,"

I like how your talking to the reader, telling them to "ask someone who lives down there" its as if this place is in reach, that we are able to talk to the people who are down there.

"your soul will be given to the devil,
just like mine,
that is why the call me living dead."

All our souls will be given to the devil anyways so, I agree with this poem. Good job with it. Again I love how you put your name in the poem. Original, I never thought of doing that. Good poem :)